My poem. It's callrf "Expectations"

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  1. skybird

    skybird Member

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    There I lie on my back
    watching clouds go by
    seas of winds pass me on my face
    and butterflys utilise the energies
    that was offered from the sky
    I see a dragon, then a dog
    And a wagon that pass me by
    On the sea of my imagination

    I close my eyes and drift in wander
    Then from a distance I hear a thunder
    Those clouds have darkened their rage
    and nature has turned the page
    to a gloomy and withering state
    of what echos in my mind
    on the sea of my imagination

    I pick myself up to a standing position
    and head towards the home of my tradition
    see the brown leaves
    falling from the trees
    raindrops wet my curly hair
    people stood and stare
    on the sea of my imagination

    I wave a goodbye
    no one answers
    I don't know why
    their faces angry as I go by
    Expectations from a cloudy day
    has been interrupted to a gray situation
    on the sea of my imagination.

    Produce of Dovey
     
  2. skybird

    skybird Member

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    Another one I wrote. This one's called "That's cool"

    She comes to me with her scented fragrant
    flying over my head with a defiant
    look on her knowing face
    "What do you know?"I ask my lady
    "Am I so shallow? I cannot escape your view,"
    And she leadith me to the corner of her empty room
    A bed, a chair and a carpet loomed
    lying on the floor
    Then she leaves me to my self and as I look around
    I notice a faint yonder sound
    Coming from outside the window
    My curiosity bites my hollow mind
    Am I going blind?
    The window was a picture of the future
    Doomed doomed to wither and rot
    She touched me and I freezed on the spot
    "It's alright." said she with a smile
    "I left you just for a while
    Come dance with me my silly fool."
    I grabbed her by the waist
    and said "That's cool."
     
  3. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    I liked the first one especially, quite an interesting situation.
     
  4. skybird

    skybird Member

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    Thank you trippinBTM

    This next one is called "The Queen of Soho" I hope you lyou like this one"

    Yet, my love
    Where have we met?
    In space? On land? Don't know yet
    But I seek thee, my erotic dream
    To me you seem
    Like a torrent yet to be free.

    And what do you need?
    Oh Queen of Soho
    My eyes sqwint as I enter my seed
    Inside of thee, ho ho ho ho
    I arch my back and see thy dragon
    Riding on the trail pulling a wagon

    Love of my days
    I see you in a haze
    but as I grasp your waist
    and draw thee to me I taste
    Your lips fresh like a flower
    full of life and power.
     
  5. pagansrule!

    pagansrule! Member

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    Very awesome, I love how your thoughts flow unrestricted.
     
  6. skybird

    skybird Member

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    Thanks. I'll post some more...
     
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