Spiders of confusion

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Mordiana, Dec 21, 2005.

  1. Mordiana

    Mordiana Member

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    I’m stuck in a maze of wire,
    Wires made of thoughts,
    Running in circles,
    Trapped in a poisoned mind,


    And I found the black pool,
    The source of all my fear,
    It mirrors my world inverted,
    Reflecting all in another light,
    Yet I miss from the picture,
    And how can you understand the ego,
    If you have no selfreflection?


    One step, silent and lost,
    Can make the difference of the fall,
    Stuck in a maze of wire,
    Entangled in this web of,
    My spiders of confusion,
    And in this net,
    I loose track of my ego,
    I am all so theres nothing left to be me,
    In which, I feel lost,
    As my spiders of confusion,
    Are spinning me in..







    I've been too confused for words many times but I guess maye something comes from it.

    By the way.. ©Isabelle rinkens 2005
    But I guess that obvious.
    I still have to use these for my band (its lyrics).
     
  2. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    enjoyed this, Mordiana! you have a great flow to your words, a spiraling kind of effect almost. the end result did leave a lost, confused vibe to it... dark and uncomfortable... I always like this kinda stuff, so much more to personally identify with, thanks for sharing it :)
     
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