The Doors

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by TheLizardKingMike, Dec 18, 2005.

  1. TheLizardKingMike

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    The black mamba takes the stage
    The shaman screaming
    A fit of rage

    The leather rider in his cowboy shoes
    Swirling mad
    Got those running blues

    Dark music pumping
    The poetry flows
    Crowd in a trance
    Rhyme and reason
    The poet's prose
    His lines of verse are too perverse
    The secrets of your inner self exposed

    Up and down
    All around
    Violent energy
    The soul of a clown

    The magic circle
    The four artists
    On the same plane
    A shared mind
    One collected conciousness

    The front-man is an outlaw
    Wanted for obcenity
    And lewd conduct

    A keyboard god
    Of stride piano
    A guitar satyr
    Master of slide
    A furious uptight drummer
    Sounds of guns, thunder

    They are the band
    The one to listen to
    Defined music
    And they call themselves
    The Doors
     
  2. GypsyPriestess

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    :sunglasse *gets out Doors cd, slaps on headphones*:sunglasse
     
  3. floyd4peace

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    dude sweet...i was just listening to"the end" last night..anyways totally wicked poem the brilliant facts about a brilliant band.great job man
     
  4. TheLizardKingMike

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    Thanks alot guys, this is one that I had in my head for a long time, I just didn't get arounfd to writing it until yesterday.
     
  5. El Guzano

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    1854—91, French poet who had a great influence on the symbolists and subsequent modern poets, b. Charleville. A defiant and precocious youth, Rimbaud at 16 sent some poems to Verlaine, who liked his work and invited him to Paris. In 1872—73 the two poets lived together in London and Brussels. In a drunken quarrel Verlaine fired a pistol, wounding Rimbaud, and their relationship ended. Rimbaud returned home and finished Une Saison en enfer (1873), a confessional autobiography in which he renounces his former hellish life and his work. At an undetermined time he produced Les Illuminations, consisting of prose poems that transcend all traditional syntax and narrative elements.



    Rimbaud is thought to have stopped writing poetry at the age of 19, and he never wrote another literary work. Thereafter, he wandered throughout Europe and N Africa, working in various jobs, from circus cashier to commercial traveler to African gunrunner, and engaging in numerous business ventures. Six months after the amputation of his leg due to cancer, he died in Marseilles at 37. Rimbaud's poetry has been called hallucinatory because the poet seems to write not of material reality but of his dreamworld; his technique anticipates the symbolists in its suggestiveness, its abstract verbal music, and its images drawn from the subconscious. "Le Bateau ivre" ( "The Drunken Boat" ) is an outstanding example. Rimbaud's works were published by Verlaine in several posthumous editions, the first complete collection appearing in 1898.
     
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  7. Jerry

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    Fuck writing about Jim Morrison
    go do 100 hits of acid and break on through
    thats what he would rather have you do
     
  8. TheLizardKingMike

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    First of all, this poem is about The Doors. Second, if I could find and afford 100 hits of acid, I would eat it. I was just expresing myself and I don't know how you would know what Morrison would want me to do.
     
  9. Jed92

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    Dude that's a sweet poem. I love the doors so much. And to the that tool who was goin on about morrison. First off Morrison only did a bit of acid. He did mescaline (poete buttons) and reefer (that man could roll a j) other shit but hardly ever did acid.Get your shit straight
     
  10. Jerry

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    you must be totaly out of your mind to claim Jim Morrison did not do acid. I have read numrous bio's about him and have been a huge Doors fan for years. I know just about everything about Jim you can without actually meeting him. Jim did acid extensivly when he was in Venice California living on rooftops, this was the time period in which he said he heard Doors concerts in his head and had to write down all the lyrics. Jim would be tripping on ACID all the time. Yes, he did also do Peyote and smoked a shit load of weed, where you got the idea that he can roll a good j, I don't know. Now, i don't know why your all so hostile. I liked the poem, but all I was saying was that if your a doors fan you should enjoy breaking through. You can't REALLY understand the Doors and Jim's lyrics until you have done so.
     
  11. Jerry

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    To show I know what im talking about when it comes to Morrison, i wrote my own little poem about him as an example, hope you enjoy it LizardKingMike.

    Lonely child reading to escape
    Nietzche's will to power
    he seized his fate

    In his younger years
    he moved from town to town
    tellin' all to face their fears
    if they want to get down

    headed out to the west
    to attend an art film school
    found out he was like the rest
    and was sick of elder's rule

    dropped out
    dropped hits
    began to shout
    in frantic fits

    Found Ray in the sunny sand
    sang moonlight drive
    to make him understand
    and so began
    a legend's band

    Made the music sound just right
    Went around to find a show
    journeyed into hopeless night
    and found Whisky a Go-Go

    Who is this psycho everyone asked
    as he danced and the music blast
    Kill the father, fuck the mother
    he became the demon lover

    Break on through, was what we said
    run with him, as he led
    Tellin' all to take a chance
    and do a shaman fire dance

    Raging darkness went with him
    he was no flower child
    filled his cup to the brim
    and went fuckin' wild

    Music of orgsamic flow
    the magic it would bring
    Jim claimed to always know
    We would remeber the Lizard King

    Like a comet he flew by
    in his youth, he would die
    He always wanted to reach the end
    cause he knew, there would be none like him
    ...again
     
  12. TheLizardKingMike

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    That poem is very accurate, but the one I wrote was more about The Doors experience on the stage. I really liked it, it's just that I was going for something completely different.
     
  13. hippiewitch

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    I like it.:) And I LOVE Jim Morrison and The Doors too! I wrote a few poems for Jim. I can post them here sometime soon.


    Peace,
    Michelle

     

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