The great journey to free our kinds

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by GaiasGypsieChild13, Jul 16, 2004.

  1. GaiasGypsieChild13

    GaiasGypsieChild13 Member

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    We will stand up, fight the critism that bears our minds
    We will go on a great journey, to free our kinds

    Today is the day, seize the dark yesterday
    To break away, to escape, the wrath of the control monster, Hurray!

    Oh how it would be, to take this great journey
    To help kindreds be free

    Oh how it would be, to write a book
    About freedom chance, something we took

    Always contemplating, to go or to stay
    Then the day will be the day
    We will walk into the lands of treasers and mocks
     
  2. iscreamchocolate

    iscreamchocolate Senior Member

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    this is a very emotional yet it has a bit of a "go go go we can do it!!" thing to it.. haa haaa idf you know what I mean. This is a very good one. *clap* *hand shakes* great job... i like thre rythem to it as well
     

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