On the top of clouds

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by toolab, Jul 14, 2004.

  1. toolab

    toolab Member

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    I dwell on the top of clouds
    their elegant softness engulfs me
    soaring high above I hear Earth beckoning
    I dare not listen to the subtle message
    that I am earthbound,

    On the top of clouds
    years pass by without me noticing
    time stands still on the top of clouds
    and worldly troubles are easily forgotten
    in the wispy whiteness,

    On the top of clouds
    I love the feel of the gentle thermals
    lifting my spirits and cruising alongside Angels
    who look at me with curiosity
    and I am welcomed,

    Someday, on the top of clouds
    I shall no longer contemplate my death
    for when the time comes I shall know what to do
    and I will dwell permanently
    on the top of clouds.

    Peace to all. I hope we all will dwell on the top of clouds someday!!!

    ALI
     
  2. guardian_tnaos

    guardian_tnaos Member

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    i liked it. it had a kind of dreamy, weepy feel to it. it was cool.
     
  3. toolab

    toolab Member

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    Thanks for the comments.


    ALI
     

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