Just a stupid poem

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Inspira, Dec 8, 2005.

  1. Inspira

    Inspira Member

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    I am finding and losing myself
    Finding me as life develops
    Losing myself in choices


    I’m longing to find you
    I do not know who you are
    You take many shapes
    In my dreams


    I know not who you are
    I only know that when I find you
    I’ll be whole and I’ll be me


    Age doesn’t matter
    Come as you are
    I want to be complete


    I am thinking of you
    When will you find me?
    When will I know you?
    When will I see who you are?
    Will I forever be alone?






    ok, this was no good......It's sort of how i feel, but i don't think i'm that good at expressing myself. Could you write a little of what you think? Give advice(i already know it if you're gonna say cliche), i don't know?
     
  2. beatricequab

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    hmmm...The search, that is something that seems to be in everyone's mind...searching for something. I admire what you wrote and you are good at expressing yourself, who could you possibly think would be any better at it than YOU?
     

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