Soul Gazing.. poem

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  1. greengoddess

    greengoddess Nature Freak!

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    Soul Gazing

    As the sun rises,
    my love soars,
    the look in his eyes,
    the smell of his colonge,
    the taste on his lips,
    all bring me back to this perfect world
    where love conqures all.
    It's loves journey through the many
    differant parts of the soul.
    The happiness it all can bring,
    the pure maddness of ones soul touching
    another.
    As the sun sets,
    my love still grows,
    the days grow no longer,
    but it seems time stands still as we make
    love to the sound of our hearts beating
    faster and faster,
    connecting in the way only two lovers can by
    candlelight.



    I wrote this for my hubby..
    if you'd like to check any of my writting out go to: http://www.poetry.com/Publications/search.asp

    let me know what you think if you will..

    much love always,
    Hollie*
     
  2. greengoddess

    greengoddess Nature Freak!

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    oops link doesn't work...
    just type: Gjoen, Hollie

    it's at www.poetry.com
     
  3. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    wow this is a lovely lovely piece :)
     
  4. winter skye dream

    winter skye dream Member

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    wow i realy liked it...it had alot of feeling and u can tell that u wrote it w/ your heart
     
  5. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    I love candlelight... great poem, I'm sure he was honored.

    ~* Blessed Be *~
     
  6. greengoddess

    greengoddess Nature Freak!

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    aaww thanks guys.. it actually got published by poetry.com in a book... it's one of my favorites...
     
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