there are some spelling errers here and there but you'll get ever it trust me A Rose For You A rose in the garden has died once befor dnt show your face around here no more the times of ridicule are gone for sure The lies u have buried befor me Show throu your gleaming eyes here we stand here I wait for the past, it is fading to turn all gray and hazy when will you come clean Act of kindness we shall c… your nothing but a mirage to me As the roses lay across the floor The thorns tear at my feet Unable to understand this epiphany Your face lingers in my memories And your lies drill at my heart here we stand here I wait for the past, it is fading to turn all gray and hazy when will you come clean Act of kindness we shall c… your nothing but a mirage to me In time you will lay 6 feet down Roses lying across your grave Your family b grieve for bit But I won’t b around for that In the afterlife we shall not meet You have turn away from my lives path
yea that would work. well anyway im gonna say it again i like it! where did u get the inspiration for it? it sounds real sad.
thnkx.........im wondering if anybody has any advice to help me become a better writter cuz i just started this writting lyrics/peoms which every u like to call it.... i would appreciate any help i can get.
