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Moments of quiet reflection

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by marquis_de_odde, Nov 29, 2005.

  1. marquis_de_odde

    marquis_de_odde Member

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    And now is it here?
    Have all my hopes lead me to this moment
    To kiss you on the lips
    Turns me onto your vibe
    More than a physical aching
    Not to deny that deep core burning
    But something else resides in this
    So alien to the ettiquette in these situations
    If I confess I'm rushing it
    If I deny I'm looking it straight in the eye
    Can't denounce something
    So strangely familiar
    If I let my guard down will it be in vain?
    At this point do I really care?
    All questions leading to the same conclusion
    Something groovy is in the mix
    Already I've learned so much
    Could mystic east indian ramblings
    Truly grasp the concept
    Of coincidence?
     
  2. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    That was very sweet.

    The first half was so feeling and open, then the second half changed after
    ... 'do I really care?' and became intelligent.... both were true in that they
    are means for attention. We all express for attention, whether it be to share, give or get... and attract that which meets our offering. It is a matter of what feels good to you.

    Sorry, enough of my blah blah reading into your beautiful words...
    they were well spoken and flowed with ease offering many perceptions,
    thanks for sharing your moments of quiet reflection,
    those are some of my favorites.
     
  3. marquis_de_odde

    marquis_de_odde Member

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    Thanks Sylvan,glad you enjoyed it,haven't written much lately and trying to get back in the swing of things so it's nice to hear some positive feedback.
     
  4. ~peace~

    ~peace~ Senior Member

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    that is very groovy nice one
    ~peace~
     
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