another poem

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Carlfloydfan, Nov 29, 2005.

  1. Carlfloydfan

    Carlfloydfan Travel lover

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    okay with the first one out of the way (i was nervrous to post that first one) here is #2:

    tell me what you think of my late night insomnia bred jibba jabba

    the blue colored shadows
    cast indifference on her face
    but I can tell she is blushing
    clutching the remains of sanity
    as the wolves feast on her anguish
    and spit out the remains ten fold
    magnified by the spirits of deciet
    who breath sympathy
    but bathe in the defeat
     
  2. Billie Spears

    Billie Spears Member

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    Incredible, I love the feel, the beauty of sadness...crazy isn't it?
     
  3. Carlfloydfan

    Carlfloydfan Travel lover

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    haha thats what I was going for and I wanted to attempt a second poem..something I believe she would say back. like a response
     
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