About Love...

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Sweet_Sangria, Jul 14, 2004.

  1. Sweet_Sangria

    Sweet_Sangria Member

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    I Wait for You!

    My Dreams are crowded
    with the image of Your Face....

    And I cannot fight the dreams,
    They don't wait for sleep,
    But clutch at me while I walk
    And I stumble over the love that They spill

    Like Tears without weight or wetness...

    My skin, like linen
    Longing for your touch
    But content to rustle silently
    in the solitude of its own folds...
     
    Sweet_Sangria, Jul 14, 2004
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  3. roly

    roly Senior Member

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    i like the skin like linen bit....tis a very romantic poem!

    roly.xxx
     
    roly, Jul 14, 2004
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  5. fizzy_elf

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    very heartfelt.


    i particularly like the last stanza. i think alot of us have felt like that

    xxx
     
    fizzy_elf, Jul 14, 2004
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