for my love, our life

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by flying_spoo420, Jul 13, 2004.

  1. flying_spoo420

    flying_spoo420 Member

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    alright, here it goes. I was thinking of writing music to it, but I dont know, it;s kinda premature. How'd ya like it?

    for my love, our life

    Good morning, it’s a beautiful day. My side of the bed is lonely, honey, so snuggle a little closer. In a few, we’ll rise sleepy eyed and peaceful, brew the coffee, just for the smell



    This is the beginning of the rest of our life.

    Sit back and ponder, take a little time to wonder,

    And we’ll appreciate.



    And when the sun hits the top of the sky, kiss me honey, and hold me, cuz I might fly.

    The wind to our back, and eye to eye, we can see the perfect picture. Hold it, and let it go.



    Because this is the begginning of the rest of our life,

    Sit back and ponder, take a little time to wonder,

    And We’ll appreciate.



    We could jump the first flight to our wildest dreams, first class future and live a perfect life, but instead we’ll just lie back in our content imperfections.
     
  2. fizzy_elf

    fizzy_elf Member

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    awwww i like it alot :)
     
  3. borut16

    borut16 Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    I like it lots, too.

    I like the fact that it's written in everyday's talking way. :)

    And I find this line to be very good for some reason (ironic, funny and beautiful and true at the same time) :
    'This is the beginning of the rest of our life.'

    Love,
    Borut

    EDIT: I've only just noticed, it's you Cheetah (sp?)! :) Yay! I missed you. :)
    *i rarely ever use yahoo now, though*
    How are you my fellow barefooted poet? :)
     
  4. flying_spoo420

    flying_spoo420 Member

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    I'm doing awesomely, thank you! Havent been back for awhile but already it feels good! How have YOU been doing, o little wife of mine?
    This poem was made actually while I was listening to leavin on a jet plane, and it is dedicated to all the hippies out there :D

    I'm gald everyone enjoyed it!

    I feel so loved! Peace out,
    Me!
     

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