A Tinge of Cynicsm in Limbo

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by marquis_de_odde, Nov 22, 2005.

  1. marquis_de_odde

    marquis_de_odde Member

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    I can't take the silence
    But the truth is worse
    Picking at some sembelence of normality
    Wrapped into this gong show

    If he can see all and is all fuck him
    Pain can sometimes be too deep to hurt
    So fuck him into submission
    With a monotone android frame
    No joy will be reaped
    When everything turns grey
    Save suspicion for milder times
    It's been settled in one sentence
    Life is a gaping maw
    Always waiting to invade
    Does freedom from all of this birth cynicsm?
    Is this the transition into a jaded existance?

    I've tried so hard with foolish pride
    To remain void of a terrifying reality
    No one can keep their eyes closed forever
    And everywhere I look it's tearing into my dream
    So rude to wake a person right at the good bit


    Sorry,it's quite ranty and angry,I got a bit of bad news today and needed to winge.
     
  2. Corvuspirit

    Corvuspirit Member

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    "No one can keep their eyes closed forever
    And everywhere I look it's tearing into my dream
    So rude to wake a person right at the good bit"

    what a great thump of an ending. this was a great piece...thanks for sharing
     
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