Dawn has broken

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by CHOOK, Nov 16, 2005.

  1. CHOOK

    CHOOK Member

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    Night is giving way to day
    &
    The gracious lady
    The goddess of the dawn
    Colours the eastern sky

    As she throws open the doors of the sky
    &
    Prepares a path for the sun god
    The god with the radiant hair
    Like flames of fire
    That burn and blaze
    Sets out in his chariot
    Drawn by seven steeds
    On his daily journey through the heavens
     
  2. Keramptha

    Keramptha Senior Member

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    jesus!!! What an image! it reminds me of fantaisia.
     
  3. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    ^truly. You can almost hear the thunderous music, and the splash of glorious color as the sun begins his ascent.

    "Throws open the doors of the sky"... beautiful.
     
  4. CHOOK

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    Thanks , It means heaps to me. Make the most of eachday.
     
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