I've always been young dumb and full of cum I know its an old saying But its always true for someone Especially with the way that Ive been living I do what i can i always get by I cant change who i am Im just a regular guy I help folks out I treat my ladies good I try to stay proud And live the way I should But sometimes its so hard Just to keep alive Walkin around with invisible bars Trying not to lose my drive Sometimes I go too far sometime im a fool Im no ones bright and shining star But I always keep shit cool Lately - shitman i been strugglin Tryin to be there for everyone just for them to use me up and take off to run Always feeling used Wactchin my "friends" leave Mopin around with the blues And carrying my heart on my sleeve This kinda shit sucks But I always survive I may be a young buck But I have lived a hard life In the end it makes me strong Never knwoing where to turn Everyone tellin me Im wrong Waiting for me to crash and burn But no matter how deep it gets Ill always crawl out Ive taken some hard hit But that just shows what im about Still i have to thank all those who did me wrong Like the girls who broke my bank Cause all its done is make me strong Cause thats the strength you need To be a success That bullshit yall feed that makes me rise above the rest Youll never conquer my emotions You just win a few battles Have your cruel fun Watching me struggle from my shackles But one day I will break free And still treat you just the same It'll be straight up peace loving me With a new respectful name Ill help the young ones out And remember my teenaged fun Show then what Im about and teach and help -the YOUNG DUMB AND FULL OF CUM. copyright 2004 -Brandon Swann
haha i have to say the first line made me laugh!:H nice to see some writing like this in contrast to the more serious poems on here and nature and winds that 'bloweth'
Good write and remember " sometimes you just have to have shit on other people, because they have shit on you too" It's sad but true, don't let them nasty people get to you.. Hey that rhymed..w'll i be damned..
I thought this poem was going to be about how horny you are the best part is the title... I had never heard that before
thanks yall...I was doing it so that at the beginning it is neutral, in the middle it shows me upset but then at the end it shows me rising above.....to me that is not a poetry pattern...that is life....and that is the real meaning of the poem, no matter how bad it gets, we overcome.
I like the way you trick people with the title...certainly fooled me, man At first I thought it was gonna be some sick poem about your penis, but I thought "maybe it might not be bad, I could use a good laugh" Afterwards, I read on and realized this is nothing like I thought it would be. Certainly, I realize that this piece is about how people sell you out, but it made me think about how people [sometimes including me] judge books by their cover. Anyway, this was very fun to read, and I really enjoyed reading it.
