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Saturday Night Special

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by marquis_de_odde, Nov 18, 2005.

  1. marquis_de_odde

    marquis_de_odde Member

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    Creatures of the dark
    Trollop through the night
    Embedded in a hazy garden
    Their eyes are scarcely seen
    Slitted lids hide limpid reflection
    The skin is cold and ashen
    They have no concept of morality

    Slap on gaudy ruby paint
    Crack into bottles of cheap champagne
    Show off your monsterous assests
    In the name of satisfaction

    One slips from the pack
    Locks sights to fairly firm flesh
    Fondles every pervasive thought
    That scrapes her subconcious

    Ripping out a tribal energy
    The prize has no opinions
    This force's word is deliverance
    Into more sinister seas
    Though innocently disguised as bath water
    The whole thing turns tidal wave

    Now the arms are flailing wildly
    Somewhere between exhilleration and insanity
    Tossed a helping claw
    Would he be so casual to accept?

    Time wears away at origin
    Soon enough the skin will yellow
    The eyes are already unfocused
    This whole horrror show will reproduce
     
  2. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    yikes, quite striking
    in its contrast to
    what would be accepted
    when attracted by inner vibration,
    for we all are heat seekers
    yet compromise
    with lukewarm.

    to burn or not to burn...
    is the real question.
     
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