grave magnitudes

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by fulmah, Nov 15, 2005.

  1. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    I am good.
    I am late.

    Complete coffee
    and I am extra heated
    because I’m becoming hard,
    tightening important size hard,
    the ear of the eager hand hard.

    It was in dream heat,
    the fourth hour retreat,
    an imperfect conclusion
    came in convict color sea.

    Complete departed spirit,
    the hand which is grasped
    together is destroyed.
    Love of casing
    trembles into worry;
    there is no weathering
    the stage which makes wasteful:
    pain measures weight more and more

    until there is no feeling
    the thing which waits.
    In order to attach the bottom,
    I am good, I am late.
     
  2. jamman

    jamman Member

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    interesting and intruiging
     
  3. gdhmomchild

    gdhmomchild Duct tape abuser

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    Took me a coupla reads to really appreciate this one. My heart and mind haven't been able to as easily these days.
     
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