mystery of it

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by jamman, Nov 15, 2005.

  1. jamman

    jamman Member

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    Mystery of IT (a jumble of words about nothing)


    Cheese stains eat poop daily when my mind wanders-
    I know but I don’t
    There is nothing
    There is something
    What do I do
    Run jump die
    Live sky high
    Care for nothing
    Love everything
    There is nothing to know
    No possible way it can be true
    No possible way it can be false
    Confusion has a way of making sense
    There’s no other way to explain the 6th sense
    No I don’t see dead people
    No I don’t walk on water
    I just know that the world is in a whole lot of trouble
    If someone doesn’t take action we are all royally fucked
    But why should I care, I’ll be dead before I can touch the flare
    Why there is something out there
    There is something real
    Touching that reality will only come through here
    Jello tastes good
    I know because of my tongue
    But so what
    Its not like I have to run
    From the jello eating poop monster
    There’s something more real
    Something more surreal
    Something more crazy
    Something more hazy
    Words look good but the world is wearing a hood
    I am going crazy
    I don’t know what to do
    There is only one thing to do
    Trust and ignore
    Ignorantly live forever young
    And trust my subconscious has something to tell
    For my conscious is going to hell
     
  2. BraveSirRubin

    BraveSirRubin Members

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    Nothing is exactly what this is.

    Waste of space.
     
  3. jamman

    jamman Member

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    ya it does take up alot of space doesn't it
    i could try to shrink it make it more worth your while
     
  4. jamman

    jamman Member

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    thats a bit better i believe. a bit harder to read tho, i made need glasses for this one
     
  5. gdhmomchild

    gdhmomchild Duct tape abuser

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    ummm....next time just leave it as it is, a readable size, and ignore smart ass remarks. If your poem was a waste of space, so then was his reply.
    This really wasn't my cuppa but liked the last few lines.
     
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