Crimson rain Falling on window panes Black eyes to the skies I scream again Locked away Door shut tight I'm lost in the night And I scream again Two voices are here Liquid lies enter my mind Cut them, cut the ties Stay inside Stay inside The Eye, the Eye! Watching my every move There, in the sky I scream again Mesmerized Hypnotized Sucked through to the other side Too late, I Realize I scream again. I wrote this a few days ago.
Thats sublime & darkly beautiful and also inspiring. Aww, but whence such tragedy? why such angst for one so beautiful, so young? *jA enters the thread, drawn here by the dire screams of the coca cola queen. the room is dark and eerie, but no one is to be seen. as he intensely peers through some inexplicable mist, he thinks he sees her fading presence!* i read your verse so dark and terse as if you're in a bad dream i heard you shout: "no let me out!" and now I hear you scream!! i reach for you then fall right thru two prisoners now it seems better for both to kill this ghost i'll keep watch now while you scheme to find a plan for woman and man fighting together on one team now two reasons to stop these demons we can do it, we will succeed! and after we do to bed with you! for deep rest and only good dreams -jA
Lol, wow, that was really cool This poem was inspired by my depression and schitzophrenic tendencies. It's a blend of my pain and my awakening to a higher power.
you are awesome honey. i'm wondering if, when you are traveling through such dark places, it helps you in some way to express yourself as you have so beautifully done. you paint a landscape that is evocative and surreal and inspiring. it affected me as you can see and if it made me want to help you, i'll bet it affects others too, maybe in the same way or maybe differently, but however you strike others maybe whats more important is the fact that it is you, in your little cage of distress reaching out, even if in the form of a scream. it seems to me we find salvation only in the arms of the ones who love us. you seem so very lovable Insomniac_devi, if you don't already hv such a one, i'm sure you will soon! truth! faith! yes baby! btw, your story for some reason reminds me of the song "Angels or Devils" by Dishwalla. thank you for letting me visit your little thread precious. good bye and best wishes. i hope everything will be fine for you -jA
^_^ Thanks for the interest friend. Feel free to pm me anytime. Pretty soon I'm going to start posting more of my poems on here.
