Gabriels Confusion

Paperbag that whisked past the pavements gum
it saw a purple dinosaur stained with apple juice maybe,
i'm only suggesting the elements of Gabriels floating innocence,
as he passed past Pastor Brown's empty housechurch-
why, the silence with the laughter?
Confusicatious bellows/half sighs and
every
emotive
thing.

And then he spies he sees he cries
to visualise an earth angel,
in her gloried grief
tears fall like crystal vodka
heavenly scented mouse sniffles.
He can't die to save another, but-
in his opaque sheen, wonders-
how such an evening of sorrow can serve utter bliss.
Does Gabriel have a heart, he wonders?
Basking in a human shadow/
20 minutes past a suet hour she still mourns
for some lost equal.

Let me take you to the skies,
let me wash your tears away
let the pain fall from your eyes
and let my love light up your day.
Foolish rhymes he thinks and sings
Befumbled by such different lust.

How can he tremble at a voice but
sing about another:
confidently confidence meant to...
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I love your poems,they have a very surreal feeling to them.

 

Lozi, that gave me goosebumps I love it

Confusicatious ...... i dunno about the use of that word (prolly just a big word for a numbnuts like me) ....... but i really dig the idea of the work as a whole.