Smoking Angel

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by sylvanlightning, Nov 9, 2005.

  1. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Smoking angel,
    draped in transparency,
    what answers do you find
    in your coffee grounds?

    Can you manifest eternity,
    from these half-life moments
    of compromise,
    or breathe hope
    into my all too human
    sufferings.

    My friend and guide,
    star in the obsidian night,
    how does thy voice
    balm my vexing mind so...

    What divine accord
    do you call your home...
    oh clarion-call bringer,
    from some
    swiftly approaching now.

    Please exorcise,
    these doubts,
    with your medicinal smoke.

    Your seraphanite skin glows,
    like a web of jewels,
    set against
    the banal preoccupation
    of my financial occupations.

    Whisper once more,
    of co-creation
    and the dawn of splendor,
    that my hours be lightened
    with timeless bliss.

    Teach me inner stillness,
    the power of grace,
    which rises
    like a white hawk...
    soaring with precision,
    in the landscape
    of awareness.

    Come to me,
    with unfolding petals,
    that my tensions
    may melt as surrender.

    Ask of me everything,
    that my lethargy give way
    to the fire lit under me.

    Transmute this blood,
    into streams of quickening,
    that I may rise
    above the inertia
    of despondency,
    into the azure heavens
    within me.

    Make me
    a sharpened sword,
    of discernment,
    that I might cut
    the karmic ties...
    all the bonds,
    of self defeating
    attraction.

    Show me how to love
    as the Universe loves,
    so each creature
    will receive radiant equality
    from my simple presence.


    * feedback, comments & suggestions welcome *
     
  2. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    ooooooo tasty piece of wordmappage!!
     
  3. mariecstasy

    mariecstasy Enchanted

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    intense calling for thy inner self to rise and assist the earthly self?
     
  4. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    I wanted to share something new
    and had been feeling out a poem
    on the blend between humanity
    and spirit within me.
    Thank you both for your comments.
     
  5. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    Love the flow, that repetitive structure that barely becomes apparent in the progression of stanzas. Your imagery, as always, is exquisite, as well as the vibe... there's a real sense of eagerness, as well as sincerity that I see many try to pull off not half as effectively as you have.
    I love your explorations, sylvan... you're quite adept at putting the inner self on the page... my only question comes in the last stanza... and is more curiosity than anything else... but, does the universe love? I’ve had a good morning musing over that question, came up with some interesting thoughts… thanks for stirring the hive :)
     
  6. marquis_de_odde

    marquis_de_odde Member

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    Absolutely beautiful,it was a very inspiring piece
     
  7. Keramptha

    Keramptha Senior Member

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    it's shit hot.
     
  8. mariecstasy

    mariecstasy Enchanted

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    shit hot? hahahahaha...oh he will laugh at that one:)
     
  9. Scarlit Rose Flowz

    Scarlit Rose Flowz Member

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    i breathe in toxicity
    pollution
    and i think in mutated brain cells
    like a sewer filled with pesticides
    and herbicides and insecticides
    and other assorted poisons
    inside me they take on new life
    attaching to my cells
    attaching me to false realities
    my craving for processed organics
    is the death of my spirit
    and the building of a wall around my mind
    where thoughts and ideas dont come as freely
    and the raw food cleansing harmonic fire dies
    but at least i let this world live
    and give my daily offering
    though the world seems hopeless
    and it probably is
    and i know my tasks to be empty
    i persist
    and dream of perfecting my art and practice,
    to bring this world a little closer to perfection,
    and passion, and harmony
    and i give thoughts,
    so that they may think, and realize,
    they are given thoughts, from something unconditionally loving,
    all the time, and realize life is full of interest and love,
    and opprotunity for love, jam packed full of it, its your show,
    your dream
    we can make love
    lets do it
     
  10. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    Wow man, another great poem from you, sylvan. I must admit, I envy your gift for expressing your poetry in such a beautiful, intense but also light way. Your poems are the sweet medicine that goes down easy, but does its powerful work from within.
     
  11. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    wow, thank you all! what a warm greeting...
    & scarlit rose flowz, i love poetic responses, thank you.
    just returned from dc, saw the dalai lama with marie,
    kim & greg; also experienced the native american museum
    and had a wonderful time overall.

    i'd write more but exhaustion has set in and its time to sleep.
     
  12. freefall

    freefall Member

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    wow, it hat a wonderful power and flow, piced together beuatifuly. very well done











    Love and do as you please
     
  13. Scarlit Rose Flowz

    Scarlit Rose Flowz Member

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    hope you dont mind me posting here...

    buried myself
    in food and booze
    and a little smoke there and here
    but excess is less
    when you realize a spirit lives inside you
    and sustains itself on untangible love
    and a little karma
    that trip just is not for me, not right now
    then again, what trip is me but a fool
    so to a fast ill go
    and a health food and an excercise
    these things that help me untie my twisted
    stressed, abused and ignored insides
    to help tune me in, to what im meant to do, love
    and find me a nice little groove somewhere right around here



    these symbols and signs
    are all around me
    however meaningless
    they mean the world to me
     
  14. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Don't mind at all,
    your writing is very clear
    and underlines self-reliance.
    Thank you, for another insightful sharing.


    Karma vs Grace

    At the center of all religions is the idea of Karma. You know, what you put out comes back to you: an eye for an eye, a tooth for a tooth, or in physics -- in physical laws -- every action is met by an equal or an opposite one. And yet, along comes this idea called Grace to upend all that...Love interrupts, if you like, the consequences of your actions, which in my case is very good news indeed, because I've done a lot of stupid stuff.

    Bono quoted in SATLTY DOGMA.


    I walk heart-paths,
    lighted by grace;
    illuminating the cob-webs
    like golden filigree.


    I love organic food
    and work at whole foods market,
    it is a joy not to read labels
    for additives or worry about hormones
    and antibiotics... my daughter and I
    went shopping after school today.
     
  15. Scarlit Rose Flowz

    Scarlit Rose Flowz Member

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    Love indeed
    can be found at the bottom of every religion
    and karma does indeed, come back through the interconnection all life shares as one,
    spirit really does move through all things and you can therefore never hide from it,
    It is a shame Jesus
    is made to look like an impossible one of a kind
    when all he was tryin to say, is spread love and be kind
    and occasionally smoke some kind
    for that plant is a gift, a tool left by our creator, grown organically with ease and providing humans with more purposes than the cherished oil we drown ourselves in, more nutritious than fish or flax or animal flesh, and a high as sacred as the mind of god his self
    but apparently that is too much
    and religion, too often becomes a mistake
    and something beat into your brain from the time your a child
    not something you grow to love and hold dearly to your heart
    like the God i came to know in nature, gods real house,
    all by myself, no middle man or priest commanding me
    or scaring me into conformity with threats of damnation or punishment
    i now know, punishment is a man made creation,
    and everything is a creation
    underneath, god is unconditional love and love is everything
    and as humanity goes higher and higher tech
    our spirituality drops lower and lower
    sailing the world and conquering outer space
    when were complete novices at inner space

    natural food stores carry toxic products too
    blended in with the beauty the earth intended to nurture our bodies and spirits with,
    like hemp seeds, or ezekiel breads,
    complete with miraculous full protein sacraficed willingly from high plants that are still,
    unlike that of the tortured animal souls we torment and abuse,
    and lock up in cages, as we steal their babies and lock them in crates for months, for the milk of another species were convinced we need, much like religion,
    and then the undernourished baby, crated for a month, is now tender, tormented, slaughtered and sold as veil, the meat industry has one of the deppest veils, and its spell is too easy to break when your kind with intention,
    its a story that would wreck and break any real humans heart if they saw it,
    on a lighter note, even though the organic sugar saturated dark chocolate is toxic,
    its on a level small enough for me to accept
    and their sometimes poison to the earth too with petroleum packages,
    but its a step forward and i hold them dear as well,
    for if god is nature, we are to start worshipping that first
    and see where that takes us
     
  16. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
     
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