The 13th Ode

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Lozi, Nov 9, 2005.

  1. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    To softly catch your skin
    with my pillow lips,
    cushioned like severed satin and
    (when darkness fell)
    wouldn't we love to gaze at each others matador stares..
    while a pitied day goes by without our knowing!
    Two felled deer depict the trees fell gaze
    too,
    unlike our starry dual.

    Fair prince in darkening eve,
    does thou go to the gates to slay
    or nay
    But then again,
    do i really care


    sometimes
    i wish i did.
     
  2. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Thats beautiful, wonderful flow and great texture...
    I really enjoyed it.
     
  3. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    thanks sylvan, it was inspired by the beauty of a fellow forumer
     
  4. EternalHunter

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    Stars dance on lips that speak your words.
     
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