compassion

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by yeahyeahyeah, Jul 2, 2004.

  1. yeahyeahyeah

    yeahyeahyeah Member

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    Little lines that grace your face tell me such a different story of what your heart portrays.

    I wish I could absorb all your pain, I would carry it away and leave you nothing but peace.

    Hopefully opening a spot for me to start a healing process I would continue for eternity.

    I've known you for such a short period of time and already my heart cries for the wrongs that have been done to you.

    I want your happiness, your tender smiles of security that fill my soul with warmth that will hopefully never turn cold.

    Each day that passes and I get to know you, I fall deeper for your unknown.

    You are the mystery that I longed to know.

    You totally expanded my comfort zone to a whole other level of spiritual wealth.

    Thank you for letting me learn myself for the first time.

    You have opened a portal that I have never explored.

    So easy, fresh, and newborn.

    You are taking me on a journey of uncertainty.

    I'm trusting you with all of me.

    I'm laying my heart out for you to carve your thoughts into.

    Forever bonding our souls together.

    For whatever might be within


    Compassion......
     
  2. Moonjava

    Moonjava Senior Member

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    wow, sounds like you've met someone really special. I'd be flattered if someone wrote these great things about me. Great expression of feelings. I felt the love :p peace.
     
  3. yeahyeahyeah

    yeahyeahyeah Member

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    thank you sweetheart...and yes i've met my soul mate i belive
     
  4. Mui

    Mui Senior Member

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    awwwww :p
     
  5. Moonjava

    Moonjava Senior Member

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    That's just great! Isn't it a great feeling to share a closeness with someone that no one else can possible understand? I hope everything works out!
     
  6. fizzy_elf

    fizzy_elf Member

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    oh my gosh i love it. i simply utterly completely am in love with it. just so amazing. i can identify with alot of this piece, and its such a pure, wonderful expression of beautiful feelings. nothing barred. the person you wrote this for is extremely lucky :)
     
  7. yeahyeahyeah

    yeahyeahyeah Member

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    Oh Well, Thank You Sweetie...pm Me And I'll Tell You Who I Am
     
  8. MrDefiant

    MrDefiant Member

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    shit thats good
    seriously, nothing I have ever read has come close to that
    whoever you are, you have my attention
     
  9. sweetdreadlover

    sweetdreadlover TattooedRainbowGurl

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    wow..i can totally relate to that...its exactly how i feel about the one i am with...soul mate...beautiful term...
     
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