black hearts falling :o)

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by cara27, Oct 27, 2005.

  1. cara27

    cara27 Member

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    BLACK HEARTS FALLING


    black hearts falling
    pure souls calling
    innocence crying
    angels weep as the hardened hearts fall
    they feel their pain and see the cynicism
    but from afar a bright light made itself known
    it shined so brightly, almost too harsh for our simply human eyes
    rescueing the pure and innocent
    swooping down and grabbing them up in just the right moment.
    ECSTATIC!!
    they had been redeemed
    and now the balance of the scales has changed..
    the pure of heart will rise above...
     
  2. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    nice break in the block there ...'ECSTATIC'...brill piece, keep writing
     
  3. brandonveg

    brandonveg Member

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    cool poem
     
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