Bent but not Broken She was strong like a fortress Fragile as glass but would not break The evil ones hurled her into oblivion, in the hopes that she would never recover The shove into the abyss bent her beyond recognition But they didn't know the power she pocessed In her typical metamorphic fashion, she came out of the nothingness ever more radiant She shined brightly, with sunshine in her smile. Their plot had failed them. Only those who threw the dagger in her heart would never again be the same. You see, what they didn't know... Although she may be bent, She'll never be broken.
i like it, except for some of the wording... "Was though she may can be bent" is one that stood out... just makes it a bit difficult to read. and i think making new lines for some of those old ones might help too, but i am definitely the type that likes stanzas. i have difficulty keeping up with one long poem. anyway i do like it. like a fantasy story to tell how a woman gets over broken heart after broken heart (or should i say bent?) coming out even stronger... those that want to beat her down fail miserably because she has such a strong spirit... yeah, it's cool.
you're right. that one especially sounds choppy after i read it again. i'm gonna change it to 'Although she may be bent, she will never be broken' thanks! peace and love. -Cara-
