Trainwreck (written by me...)

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by SunshineLovePeace, Oct 19, 2005.

  1. SunshineLovePeace

    SunshineLovePeace all you need is love

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    We are a trainwreck
    In slow motion.
    Incredible,
    Yet hard to watch.
    Unable to stop
    The fate waiting for us.
    Trying so hard
    To not crash and burn.
    Slowly dying,
    Yet wanting to live so badly.
    Caught up in the things
    That we once had.
    Can we stop
    This train from crashing?
    I want that more
    Than anything in the world.
    If not, what will we do?
    Will we be able to
    Board that train again?
    Probably not,
    For we have been scarred for life.


    eek i know its not that good, but oh well....its one of the many I have written, but one of my more recent ones. Just thought I would post it and see what you guys think....:&
     
  2. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    i've seen worse believe me! Sunshineloveandpeace, this is a good poem, don't stop writing..
     
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