Hollow Man of the Harvest

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Cloudminerva, Oct 21, 2005.

  1. Cloudminerva

    Cloudminerva Member

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    The autumn sun over the fields
    And the breeze that stirs the moan over the hill
    Just in the distance
    Is the silent watcher of the harvest...
    Silent man of the harvester.
    He knows not why he does,
    He feels his loss to another man's gain
    and he watches the birds steer away.
    "Am I free and he the slave?"
    Then the wind brings crow and blackbird
    To lite upon the shoulder of the silent man... suspended in the air.
    They fill each other's presence
    Because of solitude that bonds them.
    ...It reminds me that the man who thinks himself "full"
    is emptier than the silent man, the Hollow Man of the Harvest.
    And the wind says his every word.


    This is a new poem that I wrote. I thought that is would fit autumn really well, and maybe the story behind the poem isn't too easy to get ;)
    Enjoy!

    Ben.
     
  2. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    oo this is quite the chilling write, kind of reminds me of Blake...
     
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