A ball... A ball bouncing

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by sitareric, Oct 17, 2005.

  1. sitareric

    sitareric Banned

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    Up and down there it goes.. Yayy
    oh and it falls to the ground again
    A dragons smoke breathes the fire
    wlaking the long straight road juxtaposed
    perpendicular to a superimposed horizon
    on which is the line i truly walk.

    When the sun falls, behind the red hills
    the balls bounces up and through the clouds
    into my mind again i look down, the sun is the ball
    the ball is the clouds, to and fro back and forth
    all is slippery on the steps leading to the hole in your head.

    But then i find once again, the whole, the whole in your head, is the hole in mine reflections back and forth, like the ball bouncing passing it together in unison. Until it falls like the sun behind the hills in the cherry red sunset that i picked your fruit to bare, i sucked its juices ripe, a couple bugs crawl, but thats okay! in the grand scheme of things. All is free. To your Touch.

    You eat me alive, ripe and ready for the pickin'... up and down and all around we go, sliping and sliding adventure through a time that has no meaning any more. In my heart i know far far away i go.
    The ball bounces past that cherry red hill, and becomes the stars in your far reaching landscopic arms love.
     
  2. padster.

    padster. Member

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    im lost for words...
     
  3. Splashing in the Sea

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  4. sitareric

    sitareric Banned

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    I love you too Caitlin...:)... beyond time and space...
     
  5. Court_lew_0216

    Court_lew_0216 True Aquarius

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    i second that........ damn............. i melt everytime i read your works......... i so have to meet you. lol..... no seriously its amazing
     
  6. sitareric

    sitareric Banned

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    Thank you...:) i think its far out you dig it so much... This one was written about the great goddess Caitlin.. whom im engaged to
     
  7. Court_lew_0216

    Court_lew_0216 True Aquarius

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    *sigh* that's soooooo sweet........
     

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