Design of desire

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by marquis_de_odde, Oct 14, 2005.

  1. marquis_de_odde

    marquis_de_odde Member

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    Lovely open ceremony
    Quick before the dawn
    Who was first targeted
    Electric currents shook us
    Feet planted firmly in the air
    We ran round the fountains
    Holding hands and gliding
    Cheeky little angels
    Now all's fallen strange
    Decision's fingers toussle my hair
    I pray the forged premonition
    May be a lesser degree of my madness
    Regardless the statistical outcome
    I've already succumb
     
  2. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    hey again marquis, how's it going? this piece feels like a romantic moment where both individuals are taken aback by the intensity and the buzz
     
  3. marquis_de_odde

    marquis_de_odde Member

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    Hiya Lozi,it's going very well and you're spot on about the basis for my poem.
     
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