Oh Wind

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by SunFree, Jul 7, 2004.

  1. SunFree

    SunFree Member

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    Oh wind . . .
    where does the time go?
    does it float gently to the tree tops, for the birds?
    Do you blow it softly into deep places where caring and
    empathetic eyes may recall it
    with deft illusions and symbologies?
    or . . .
    in the haze of horizons
    to find the ends of forgotten anonymity?

    Do these times know one another
    in the end,
    atleast?
    In obscuirity and lost credibility
    imperative dates now crumpled and soggy with
    last week's newspapers -
    sidewalk scattered headlines.

    Alone in the midst of endless ends
    But,
    with worn out times together . . .
    atleast
    they'd have a friend.
     
  2. octofryed

    octofryed Member

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    wow... really good. it's even more impressive that someone so young could write so poetically about the passage of time. well done.

    namaste,
    doug
     
  3. VanAstral

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    aye, smooth voice, nice job!
     
  4. SunFree

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    :) thank ya, very much!
     
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