pale horse and divine secret!

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by ripple23, Jul 6, 2004.

  1. ripple23

    ripple23 Member

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    In the dark someone says 'at noon a foolish lover...'
    I might have said ' dead moon black sun'

    In the dark someone says 'Outstanding universe!'
    I might have said 'you designed a stiller sky'

    In the dark someone says 'a cold sea sacrifice'
    I might have said 'i want to touch you with your sighs'

    There is a word about the rain when we're together.

    (you are not the only answer to the stars)

    In the dark someone says 'pale horse and divine secret'
    and then someone says 'we are ourselves dreams'
     
  2. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    Sooo strange....yet sooo...mysterious and inspiring...

    "In the dark someone says 'a cold sea sacrifice'
    I might have said 'i want to touch you with your sighs'"

    Delicious!
     
  3. ripple23

    ripple23 Member

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    thanks. i feel like I should bow or somethin...
     
  4. octofryed

    octofryed Member

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    i loved the imagery... especially the line that kittenX mentioned.
     
  5. VanAstral

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    trippy!8910
     
  6. ripple23

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    yeahhh :) you know...
     
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