goddess of the night

this moon,
full,
luminescent.

i sing sweetly
longing
to feel the pull
to connect.

i imagine
you
somewhere
under this same
starry sky.
under this golden
goddess of the night

and i dream that this love
that swells inside
has become
a collage of many colors

effortlessly
i send this love
to the moon
...to you.
her rays
reaching out to touch
your heart

 

I love this poem really a lot it uses the moon to connect.... it kind of makes you want to cry makes you imagine a woman stareing up at the moon longing for her lost lover... suh a sad tale but it was beautifully written so it didnt seem cheesy.

under this golden
goddess of the night - i really liked this bit.


and i dream that this love
that swells inside <--- this bit I didnt understand so much
has become
a collage of many colors

overall beautiful poem in my eyes. thank you i rather enjoyed it.

 

i love the way your energy reaches to all
like the moons full round beauty that
we all see amongst the starry sky..

love n peace from saff

 

Beautiful..That was truly beautiful (sigh)

 

After some very rough rough times HELEN i am back! This is my new login thingie i couldnt get back onto my old account so whatever this K.Eltinae! remember me? I have so much to tell you but when i read your poem it was like a rush of nostalgic brilliance I truly truly envy you .. you are an amazing poetess the poem is EXCEPTIONAL
With Much Love and Admiration,
K.

 

nice...very romantic. funny enough... i've also used the moon as a connecting device to someone far away so i could really relate to your poem.