sometimes i just want to take alot of something and leave my head

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by inbloom, Jul 7, 2004.

  1. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

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    i have 10 minutes left in my system,
    after that i can't quite understand much
    i'm trying to bring tears, but my ducts are dry
    from years of holding back the things inside
    constipated my tears and now i'm dry
    maybe i shouldn't have thrown away
    the bottle, or the poems i wrote years ago.
    but i'm feeling so confused that i can't even
    finish this poe.....
     
  2. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

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    i think it's important to mention that i just hit the "new topic" button and wrote this on the spot...
     
  3. octofryed

    octofryed Member

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    i liked how it just ended... it's cool when you're able to just write something on the spot without a whole lot of thought put into it... it happens to me every once in a while.
     
  4. lucyinthesky

    lucyinthesky Tie Dyed Soul

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    amazing...
     
  5. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

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    thanks you guys, i really appreciate it! :D
     
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