This is more of a song than a poem but I gon't no where else to post it and I really want to get peoples opinions on stuff I write so I can improve. *Chorus* Get me outta here I wanna fly like an angel through the sky Turning heads and floating by Living life Living life So high *verses* I wanna live my life in peace I wanna live under a roof of trees Want my carpet to be ground Want my music to be the sound of living I don't think of people highly I see them in a dim light I don't know how we could change it I just know it isn't right Can't see through the mists of time Try to hard you'll lose your mind Prophets live and show the way But ears are closed and eyes have long gone away SO wat tips could you give me for future writings ? And any opinions would be gd.
