I am So basic and unflattering. Validation From me, works like a leap year. I'm sorry to make you feel bleak And less than worthy While others i hold high When it is really you, whom i Love like no other - It is really you, i yearn For everyday - It is really you, who shifted a Boulder inside of me. How did you work it? You caught me unawares, Blinded by your mediocrity, Which turned into despair - On my part, because you Startled me with fright When you led me into your den And grappled with my heart And made it tick again. You are solid gold - Turned black by many fires That scorched your very innards And have hindered your desires. I would like to Polish you clean, But i am not the women. I am not the women.
I like how it isn't all rhyming poetry but you do have a few lines that rhyme. I can't bring myself to enjoy poetry if a single line doesn't rhyme. Well, I can but I enjoy poems with a few rhyming lines. But, I really dig this poem alot. It's really nice, I think.
Thanks buddy! I feel it is still quite immature but i didnt really put any time or effort into it..i just needed to release some emotions that were caught up at the time.. but thankyou for your comments!
