Blue to Red

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Cellar_Door, Oct 5, 2005.

  1. Cellar_Door

    Cellar_Door Member

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    Bah poetry, wasted space and time and paper. Wasted ink, usually on fingers, wasteful ink[​IMG]

    Here's my dabble in political poetry.
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    The Blue dress it too tight

    I feel the material twist over

    my bruised skin

    Sucking in, faint from the restraints

    of the royal silks

    I must find comfort

    I pull a Red shawl

    around my shoulders

    Clothing my body in the

    strength of a thousand threads



    We died in trenches of urban warfare

    Lives limited to one touch

    Keep breathing, the smoke and the tears

    fall from his lips as he

    speaks the last dying words

    of the revolution



    I strayed, captured by the beauty

    of blood promises of power and glory



    They fall separated

    Each one falling to the ground

    Together we stood, together fallen from

    the hands of our martyrs



    I’m afraid of the dark void

    I’m afraid of what I built

    Absence of light and dreams

    A slave to steel

    And yours painted crimson by

    the blood of my people



    Utopia excommunicated by

    the third committee of the forth standing



    I suffered for what you believed in.

    I chose the side of the oppressor and your people

    oppressed us just the same

    The swinging of the pendulum

    The hems of my skirt caught underneath



    I’m not weak, I cry purple and scream freely



    The cost of hurting you is freedom for us all

    Should I rise up against the gentleness

    of your gaze?

    I would bring down your empire

    with one blink of my lashes

    I could have their savior

    His Mistress, his capturer



    We bring you to your knees

    Begging

    Standing there I know why

    you fought so long

    So hard

    I see the desperation in your

    ideals

    The corruption in mine

    I fall begging for the center



    You desert me draped in your flags

    Abandoning every Red dream
     
  2. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    woah! *stands with mouth open* this poem is so bruised and fragile the character you're writing as....wowser....this is the most powerful piece i've read today! WOW!
     
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