Erotic Stories: See my first attempt, and Do you write any?

I decided to try to write an "erotic" story. It is my first attempt, so I expect it to be pretty messy. (it's not done yet either) Here is the link. http://home.comcast.net/~maxrez/story.html

Any of you like writing them? I really like reading them, and find them more stimulating than pictures or video much of the time. Assuming somebody writes a good one it seems to work better than porn because it is like porn for your brain. It really gets my mind going.

What do you guys think about my story and erotic stories in general (the good ones) haha?

 

check out xnxx.com they have some awsome stories, just go to the site and its on the right side of the screen

 

My favorites are from http://www.fictionmania.com
They have a lot of stuff I'm NOT into because it is either gay or too weird, but a lot of it has all the good fetishes in it. Femdom, bondage etc.