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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by ONE WEST, Jul 6, 2004.

  1. ONE WEST

    ONE WEST Member

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    I wrote this the other nite while sitting on the beach.....let me know what you think...love it...hate it.....dosent matter...be as critical as you need.....peace and vision

    I opened my window
    I looked out on the earth
    I opened my eyes and saw the beauty of the world
    I'm taking my chances
    They all come and go
    I'm takin' a journey through a life I control
    It's easy to call the shots from your chair on the top
    But takin' the fall aint so simple
    And it ain't easy to live a life
    Even though the words they seem so right
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    I couldnt remember the life I lead before
    And now I'm searching for somehting just a little more
    I step into my past
    Just didnt know where to look before
    Im movin on
    Life cant hold me back
    Im movin on
    No I wont look, I'm not looking back
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    I used to live in a world stained and black and white
    No color exsisted
    all the fear inside my mind
    It's funny how Id trap myself
    And then I go and blame it on someone else
    If people knew, they'd swear they know just how I feel
    But they'll never have a clue
    And it aint easy to live a lie
    Even though the words they seem so right
    I couldnt remeber the life I lead before
    And know I'm searching for somehting just a little more
    I step into my past
    Just didnt know where to look before
    I'm movin' on life cant hold me back
    I'm movin on......................
     
  2. strawpuppy

    strawpuppy Member

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    That's lovely...

    Really...lovely



    looking back is what nearly everyone has to come to terms with in the end...it aint easy...BUT, keep going forward...glad you saw the beauty in the earth...sometimes it's all that keeps me going...

    wish I was with you too looking at that view...

    peace, harmony and good wishes..

    strawpuppy
     
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