Not even sure its poetry....

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by ONE WEST, Jul 6, 2004.

  1. ONE WEST

    ONE WEST Member

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    Something I stumbled upon.....wrote this at or after harvest fest last year in SEWANEE....it was a great experience.....peace...


    like rays of light
    finding their way around the dense foilage of the tall oak trees.....
    the vibrations of music pulse through my body...
    the swirling light before eyes seem to dance along with the beat of music.....
    the shadows mimicking those of the sunny sky.......
    the music pulsing even deeper into my body......
    I am the music......
    I am the beat.....
    the grass begins to flow with the wind over the green sea of open land in front of me......
    the warm breeze hitting my face encourages me to walk......
    walk far...
    far away, beyond the grassy sea that lay in front of me......
    far beyond imagination, even mine.........
    i begin my journey....
    who knows where it will lead ......
    that is my drive....
     
  2. skyfire

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    yeah thats poetry, and not bad either...........................................................................................
     
  3. octofryed

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    it's poetry... and it's good.
     
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