Spherical language

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by sylvanlightning, Sep 26, 2005.

  1. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Occultation may be viewed
    as a blind-spot,
    or as fovea
    behind the lens
    of the eyes new moon.

    As ones totality expands,
    like a relaxing iris,
    the penumbra reveals
    a corona nimbus
    and subtle chromosphere ecstasy.
     
  2. TundraLotus

    TundraLotus Member

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    . . . yeah
    title is rapt alone,
    as the words came forth,
    mapped upon my parietal lobes,
    they are laden with cosmintuitive vajra essence
    taking their sweet graceful time to echo endlessly
     
  3. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    Mmmmmmmm fovea...haha
    I loved this. I had a psych exam today over this stuff.
     
  4. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

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    Very enlightening. Sylvan, you always have very inspired work. I love it!
     
  5. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Wow, thanks for all the good vibes. I didn't think anyone would reply...
    this one was a bit more mental and perception based than usual,
    however I did put some research into it.... *cheers*
     
  6. Hippievixen

    Hippievixen Lifetime Supporter Lifetime Supporter

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    'or as fovea
    behind the lens
    of the eyes new moon'

    wow, what beautiful imagery.

    you never cease to amaze, sylvan :)
     
  7. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    agree with all above, breathtaking work!
     
  8. Bocks

    Bocks Senior Member

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    Captivating!
     
  9. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Thank you all for the kind words.
    Such a warm response...
    I'll be sure and share something
    new and longer soon.
     
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