Dreamscape

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by pagansrule!, Sep 27, 2005.

  1. pagansrule!

    pagansrule! Member

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    Try to free the soul.
    Though it's hard to find.
    Trapped inside a hole,
    in the pillars of your mind.

    Yearn to feel the waves,
    Scrubbing golden sands.
    To the Moon they are but slaves,
    Obeying his commands.


    Searching for a dream,
    Lost in the faceless night.
    Awaken with a scream,
    Clinging moist with fright.

    The bleakness of the day,
    With boundaries and fences.
    At night it does give way,
    Submitting to our senses.

    Are these words but dreams?
    A fleeting moments gasp?
    Their light eternal gleams,
    Just always out of grasp.
     
  2. Keramptha

    Keramptha Senior Member

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    love THAT!!!! came frpm some higher being i suspect!!!
     
  3. realityneversticks

    realityneversticks Member

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    If this song is about keeping things real and/or finding out the deeper meaning then right on
     
  4. helen

    helen Member

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    WOW! This is a pretty powerful poem; a very deep meaning.
     

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