not enough meloncholy

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by celeritea, Sep 23, 2005.

  1. celeritea

    celeritea Member

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    consume me and ill jump right in
    deep ripples attract me like the insect we are
    allow me the secret of birth
    premit me to a sacred earth
    the sun is cerpuscular
    weakness is muscular
    landlord is vassal
    the vessel is in two parrallell melodies
    catch one and the other slips through
    butter flies and oil ooze

    how much criticism is just like booze
    how much you spent searching for rues
    your time reading my words that you wrote
    or else you wouldnt have a vote
    lets give up and climb certain trees
    without eucalyptus you wouldnt have fire
    treble and timbre combine to make a liar
    she is you but arent you me?
    love is the ignorance of mystery
     
  2. codeinecaper

    codeinecaper Member

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    yum, stop making me think!!! then hate is the genius of the predictable? hmm? so stoned sorry, still thinking, nice
     
  3. celeritea

    celeritea Member

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    i wrote that in 10 seconds...i guess i should have said that love is the absence of mystery
    thank you brother for helping me develop my mind
    love
     
  4. codeinecaper

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    wow 10 seconds, that gives me a more of sense on the pace. i see where ur coming from, keep it much
    much love
     
  5. celeritea

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    nature on skin
    battery
    heart thumping with blood
    the second level inside blue
    rises with the tide
    fires burn on the shore
    you in the middle
    even now as you chill
    your temperature rising
    electrons firing
    creatures destroy each other inside blue
    dont deny that you are a universe
    and ill kiss you to burn out the worst
     
  6. celeritea

    celeritea Member

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    its funny, codeincaper, I love to trip, but HATED salvia...its like it almost sucked all the oxygen out of me....
    i transcended the moment, dropped the pipe i was smoking it with, and then my laughter just rippled out of me into space
    then i had the WORST headache....
    my girl and I then encountered problems that would end in our separation...crazy..

    Should I use it again? :)
     
  7. codeinecaper

    codeinecaper Member

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    Most definitely. A friend of mine unfortunately encountered similar complications, but only because another unexperienced friend had adminstered it to him. He was sitting indian style on a used oil drum under a fluorescent lamp with lots of people around, as soon as i saw him hittin the pipe i knew trouble was ahead. safe, dark, quiet, undisturbed enviroments are essential as well as room for personal space to lie in. yeah, my first time i was caught by surprise since there is no definite transition phase, but as soon as i felt the sensation of being whisked away metaphysically, i knew it was a good time to put down the pipe. my breath was somewhat hindered and the laughing is most to blame, but it adapted naturally during trance. plus, there's plenty people who have had that type of complication with other strong hallucinogens. you might want to start off with weaker potencies and work up, though i've shared 1g of 25x 4 ways w/ newbies under precise guidlines without problems. in fact, one of them who had mental issues felt as if he was spiritually refreshed and became more uninhibited & stable. you should check out the "Salvia Users Guide" in my sig link, pleasant visions, peace

    go with the flow
     
  8. skyfire

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    i like those lines...but for the most part the rest of the poem seems a little forced, especially the rhyming...that's how it feels to me anyway...
     
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