a white rocking chair wooden fence tea leaves steeped in cold water the remains of food of tobacco the sense of living here. dreams in and out of consciousness sleepy head couches pillow books untouched read music classic guitars squeally trailing banjo blue rainbow red black slips and sexy mama baby screams and sweets so many sweet things pink the smell of piss still lingering kombucha demons skulls and geishas drums and marajuana dishes clean dishes crusty grimy sharp knives sushi rice.
very good. i really get a sense of culture and some counter-culture in this one. Very chock full of images
Very very good. Minimalism really paints the best, the most vivid image here. It was aslmost as if I was there, I could really get the sense of the piece.
agree with all above, intense imagery creating emotion with so few words.... I ate this one up, and at the end felt fulfilled... stunning work
