a happy-fun-time poem

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by alice_d_millionaire, Sep 12, 2005.

  1. alice_d_millionaire

    alice_d_millionaire Just Do It©

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    Vegetative state of satirical existence which looms above the sails with rowboat captains of cheese swiss

    Vanish in the haze ‘mongst lines of longing doubt, spectre-like in their demeanor and hungry for kites

    Piloted by yon hand of destitute elation which knows many bounds and has no means of sustenance or car to fly

    ‘mongst the clouds of cyanide jello rising mightily above fruited plains of prosperity choked Neanderthal death leering vacantly


    Pondering vehicular transport of interstellar nature whilst rudely being beaten by bastardizations of belligerent brawn

    Necessity is a need only if it is needed by the demanding wearers of those frightful pants of patriarchal swinedom

    The essence of which is a blight on the fair leather of humanity left by eons of brutal subjugation and blatant altering of truths know in the core

    Ask not what you can do to rape the eternal bonds of humanity but take advantage of this most darwinistic facade
     
  2. alice_d_millionaire

    alice_d_millionaire Just Do It©

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    it prolly isnt even worth the time to read it, but i do like it. so c'mon and bash it or like it or whatever. :p
     
  3. alice_d_millionaire

    alice_d_millionaire Just Do It©

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  4. Daniel Herring

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    Reminds me of stuff I read in library books.
     
  5. Major Peacenik

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    I felt down but this made me feel better
     
  6. steffan

    steffan puffin

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    i sure liked it,
     
  7. soulrebel51

    soulrebel51 i's a folkie.

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    That was so poetic, and so many big words..

    that kinda took the fun out for me :p but the first two lines were pretty good (i couldn't read the rest)
     
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