I can only imagine the waves rushing to the shore the endless cycles I've read so much about. the powerful thrust of a the tide so mighty, so strong ready to engulf me and pull me along Without knowing the feeling of salt water on my face I understand its connection to the moon. Pulling me up, up up... and around only to bring me further out til I'm released back down... didn't drown.. didn't drown. I can not avoid it, It's pull is too strong, the desire keeps pushing me on and on.........and on...and on And each time I learn to stay safe on my shore to avoid the ordeal of being tattered and torn by the promising start of adventure the excitement of the unknown but as soon as I'm dry I get lured once more into the same cycle into the same into the deep dark let down.
With the exception of the quote below I loved it, though I am not sure I got the meaning quite right, but it definently gave out great feeling, nice and strong writing I think that part should be either excluded or edited could you please check out this: http://www.hipforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=117006
it was supposed to represent a driving force that cant be ignored... like the whole tide revolves around the moons pull..but I will work on it
