... for an ill friend :(

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  1. the_river_daughter

    the_river_daughter rebel scum

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    Ok i dont put much of my poetry online, but i found out today an old friend of mine from college is very ill in hospital due to drugs. She always was a wild one, and i used to go right along with her - i calmed down, she didnt. She's in intensive care right now - she should pull out. but nobody I knew was online to talk to, so this is how i expressed the way i feel.

    The High Life

    I know a girl
    Lives for the high life,
    the alcoholics' haze,
    peaceful minds and starshot eyes,
    folowing white lines on a silent page.

    I know her well,
    traveller for tomorrow feeling
    so like myself,
    rolled up our sleeves together,
    tripped societies' sodden creases,
    slowly falling under the weather.

    now I know a girl,
    walks the smoke charred pathways,
    snowflakes falling on her mind,
    i sit and through the window i'm staring,
    remembering my innocence,
    dreaming and leaving my soul behind.
     
  2. Claire

    Claire Senior Member

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    Thats lovely:)


    I've had many friends fall foul of drugs and alcohol:( Its so scary to watch when you can see disaster coming but they refuse to acknowledge it:(

    I hope she's ok Lindsey...

    My thoughts are with you... Big Hugs...Love Clairexxxx


    My msn addy is: claire@haightashbury.zzn.com
     
  3. borut16

    borut16 Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    Hey,
    that's written very lovely, and I really hope she's doing better soon...

    Drugs get abused so fast...
    I really hope she gets to feel better soon, I don't know what else to say.

    Lots of happiness,
    Borut
     
  4. RainbowLovinHippy

    RainbowLovinHippy Member

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    That's awesome hun. :) I wish peace and healing to your friend.
     
  5. emilie

    emilie Member

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    Wow, that's such a beautiful poem. Positive vibes to your friend, I hope everything works out okie for her *hugs*
     
  6. ArtLoveMusic

    ArtLoveMusic Senior Member

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    That was one of my fave poems ive seen on the forums. Its beautiful writen for a beautiful reason.

    Love to you and hope and love for you friend.
    Xoxoxox
     
  7. Fractual_

    Fractual_ cosmos factory

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    nice!!!!!!!!
     
  8. Mercy

    Mercy Member

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    That is fantastic. Wow. You should post more poetry, that was beautiful. I hope your friend is ok...drugs are a messy thing to get into...its a horrible thing to have to learn through the mistakes of your friends.
    Hope you're ok :)
    Rosie x
     
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