2005 Arabian Nights

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by toolab, Sep 6, 2005.

  1. toolab

    toolab Member

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    Hi Ya'll,

    I'm back after a long sojourn. I'm sending an anti-war poem that I wrote just a few weeks ago. I hope this poem will put it all into perspective Since America seems to fall deeper and deeper into the Iraqi abyss. Your comments are always appreciated.

    Love, Peace and Happiness

    ALI


    I dreamed of Aladdin last night

    flying on his magic carpet

    high above the city of Baghdad,



    Looking down, he saw children

    crying for their dead relatives

    and he cried with them,



    He saw the bomb-pocked land

    and it looked alien to him

    no longer resembling the city he loved,



    This ancient city of Babylon

    was aflame with the fires of destruction

    and the madness of war,



    He saw the young of great nations

    clash and kill each other

    for the sins of humanity,



    An occupational force had

    driven one madman out

    only to be replaced by a far deadlier enemy,



    Aladdin gasped at the inhumane

    methods used to kill

    and the thousands of bodies piling up,



    And he sadly wondered when

    will it all end? When

    will the children laugh again?
     
  2. Major Peacenik

    Major Peacenik Member

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    oooh nice parallel
     
  3. TundraLotus

    TundraLotus Member

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    great title first of all
    its good to read some words that use language to make a pictured-story of present events instead of just news. its hard to find a solace or accept some higher purpose for such chaos, its brutal to the insides to try.

    hopefully soon.. they'll laugh, sooner than later.
     
  4. toolab

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    Thanks TundraLotus and Major Peacenik,

    Your comments are appreciated and I truly believe that the Bush administration does not understand the folly of their ways. It will be up to the Cindy Sheerhans and us to stop the madness and press these "American Idiots" (to coin a phrase) to see the light.

    Peace,

    ALI
     

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