spirit prisoner

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Digger168, Aug 31, 2005.

  1. Digger168

    Digger168 Member

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    Hope springs on molybendium steel, eternal.
    While prostrate and naked lays my soul.

    On a thousand firebrands of nameless fear
    the truth begins to appear.

    On a vacuum fringed hole in space
    I lay my weary body in that place

    Praying that God won't excommunicate
    This gentle gesture of communication.

    In retrospect, I feel the wounds slowly heal.

    And the newly freed prisoner has his first meal.
    A breathless taste of physical grace.

    If looking in weren't a sin,
    I'd bring windex to kiss the glass.
     
  2. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    I love the way you've used the words..the sound they build up..it flows..
     
  3. Keramptha

    Keramptha Senior Member

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    it might be becuase im listenign to al greene, but this pome is existential and really fucking spiritual...hello soul friend!!
     
  4. EmbraceInnerPeaches

    EmbraceInnerPeaches Member

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    wow thats freakin awesome
     
  5. EternalHunter

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    "If looking in weren't a sin,
    I'd bring windex to kiss the glass."

    What a great ending!
     
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