Major P's Poems

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Major Peacenik, May 23, 2005.

  1. steffan

    steffan puffin

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    ^ damn i could almost grasp this, but it keeps aluding me, frustrating, fun as a riddle but frustrating
     
  2. Major Peacenik

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    My New Laptop

    The clock smiles,
    Humming as I work away.
    The sun blushes
    Over my shoulder,
    Gazing in admiration
    At the screen.

    Ideas spill themselves
    Down into jelly jars,
    One after another.
    Oiled metal clicks.
    Conveyor belts agree
    With my every word.


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    yeah, I ordered a new laptop today :rolleyes:
    the equipment doesn't make the writer,
    but it's a nice dream
     
  3. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Oh, that was fun. What kinda laptop do you have?
    Mine is an elder mac clamshell.
     
  4. Major Peacenik

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    I'm gettin an iBook! Perfect for photoshop and final cut :)
     
  5. Major Peacenik

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    Son of a Multiverse

    In samples he passed he had seen his place
    (Adjusted the mirror and spat in its face)
    The beetles who carried him knew his call:
    They'd known them all; they'd known them all.

    The sound of the sneers he had made his own
    Reflected his promises, born into waste;
    For too many times had he made it known
    How far he would go in his mission to taste.

    He jumped in his pickup and hit the road,
    Avoiding a glimmer from out of state.
    The cry of a snaretrapper eased his load;
    The plaster wore off, and a bandage replaced.

    He waved a white flag that had overflowed.
    The lines were long, and the answers closed.
    With his thimble gun and his mind agape,
    The sun of a multiverse made his escape.
     
  6. Balder

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    Great poems! My favorite: "The Salaryman" ! :)
     
  7. Major Peacenik

    Major Peacenik Member

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    The Same Six Colors

    I wake up to the sound of blur in my room
    and stare at wall rabbits who don't look back,
    indifferent like old sky habits
    as I toss my legs over a soft low hurdle
    and press down, lifting my chance
    for the day so it can't escape

    butter blue darkness, old flowers waiting
    for rising and groaning and looking and smiling
    for knowing and guessing and dreaming
    of another day, another wonder
    pulling at the hem of our jeans -
    another day, another poet
    our questions arrayed,
    our same six colors rearranged
     
  8. lovelikeair

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    I love your poetry. You are so beautifully clever with words, it really makes me smile. As for your iBook, enjoy it. I'm a mac lover myself. Have you worked with CS2 yet? And Final Cut Pro gives me headaches.
     
  9. Major Peacenik

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    Evening Light

    When all the world was quiet
    I thought I heard him speaking
    And when all the world was screaming
    I thought I heard him sigh
    And I asked him why
    He had stopped looking
    at me, so slyly,
    from across the room.

    I spoke thickly, straining
    each word through a seive.
    And though he leaned to hear,
    there was no need;
    My jeweled insects crawled to his ear
    as if touched by cold
    and nestled in.
    And he gasped when he felt them;
    He heard my frigid fingers at his heart.

    And we knew together what waiting meant -
    knots untied, mute
    trains rusting on red tracks.
    From our distance,
    we thought they still might have run;
    But we drew near and saw the wheels,
    eaten through, choking
    on bittersweet and scrub pine.

    Wounded by the evening light,
    We wanted, and said nothing.
     
  10. Major Peacenik

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    Telling

    Naively, I compare
    Telling to a roller-coster:
    Discomfort in line and the urge to turn back
    Will be forgotten in the thrill of the ride.
    So I force myself to take these steps,
    And with all the warning in the world,
    My dreams are destroyed -
    Thrashed, spun, demolished,
    Glinting at me from the bottom
    Of the garbage can.
     
  11. steffan

    steffan puffin

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    evening light , i realy like that one
     
  12. Major Peacenik

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    Bread and Butter

    Happy with another
    Happy with another
    Love his older brother
    Happy with another
    Simplifying

    Phone call in the hallway
    Phone call in the hallway
    Hurts him in a small way
    Phone call in the hallway
    Tranquilizing

    Grow-
    Should I buckle down and mend?
    Can I bring myself to bend?
    I won't suffer if I don't enjoy it,
    Just employ it.

    Happiness forever
    Happiness forever
    Such a strange endeavor
    Happiness forever
    Moralizing
     
  13. TreeFiddy

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    there is something very gripping about poems like Bee Killer and Four Foot Cow String...you're poems have a beautiful unique style, and thats why i love reading your work
     
  14. Major Peacenik

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    Town

    Under the eyes of our taskmasters
    we grow in cinderblocks, no room
    for a world beyond
    bleached verandahs,
    skylights dimmed
    by dust and the remnants
    of birds; we pulse, our hearts
    all stacked above this city.

    Atrocity is commonplace.
    The castle on the hill belongs
    not to our King, but to the man who,
    years ago, sold cheap
    Rolexes to businessmen.
    He paid his dues and collects
    ours, as we shuffle in bliss,
    all anvils landing inches from our toes.

    Neath streetlamps lie
    The town we built:
    houses of brick and sidewalks
    walled against invasive
    men
    who lean on us in flannel armor,
    jousting with memories and cigarette butts.
    Mother pulls the blinds.
     
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    Inner Monologue on Election Day, 2008

    So now's my chance to fix what has gone wrong -
    To boot that evil Tex; to start again.
    Fresh morals should collide and join in song
    As soon's I mark this ballot with my pen.

    But the GOP is stinky with disease,
    And Democrats lie slobb'ring in their beds.
    Which leaves me with the Greens or the Nazis -
    Perhaps I should write in "Weird Al", instead.

    Concentrate, now - the time has come to choose -
    (My motto is, Democracy or bust!)
    This situation seems to be lose/lose...
    The elephant and donkey both disgust.

    The only difference 'tween the two will be
    The use of red or blue artillary.


    lol... we had to write a two sonnets for english class... the other is forthcoming. :)
     
  16. osiris

    osiris Senior Member

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    "Bread and Butter" made me shudder.

    :)
     
  17. Major Peacenik

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    Meeting My Hero

    I have seen raw splendor
    turn to me,
    with blank eyes,
    and ask:
    Did you want me to sign
    it on the front, or...?
     
  18. steffan

    steffan puffin

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    always a pleasure to read your stuff lill siss
     
  19. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    I loved Town....very evocative.
     
  20. Major Peacenik

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    My Passion (Far Misplaced)

    The clouded eye
    betrays no scrap
    of friendly thought
    The cheek quivers
    not in warning
    of a smile
    No muscles wait
    in stilted nervousness

    Our silence reigns -
    Not of our joint desire,
    (as I had hoped, afloat
    above my passion
    far misplaced)

    I spoke:
    'Twas I our holy hush
    disgraced
     

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