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  1. FreeBird1969

    FreeBird1969 Fleas on their paws.

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    Hmmm...A game we played in Writer's Guild the other day.

    Basically, it shows those short-story/novel-only-type characters that you can write poetry no matter how bad you think you are at it. :)

    Okay, post your lines according to the following in this thread:

    (1st line) Write down 2 or 3 household items from your childhood that you distinctly remember.

    (2nd line) Write down 2 or 3 foods that you always have at your family reunions or that are specific to your family.

    (3rd line) Write down 2 or 3 phrases that you constantly heard as a child.

    (4th line) Write down 2 or 3 people (that you've met) that have made a big impact on your life.

    (5th line) Write down 2 or 3 instances that have changed your life. i.e. A car crash, a movie, a book, etc.

    (6th line) Write down 2 or 3 places in which you keep your memories.



























































































    Now, in front of each line, write "I am from..." and you've got yo'self a poem. :D

    Oh, it's cheezy and tres high-school, but it can get rather interesting. :D
     
  2. Orsino2

    Orsino2 Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    Negro, please. :rolleyes: :D

    I am lawnmowers, organic produce, and spare tractor parts
    I am cornbread, I am vinegar BBQ sauce, I am hot potato salad
    I am not those fucking beaurocrats again, trim the sails, and let's just go to the the beach
    I am Megg Marcella, I am Elizabeth Snow, and I am Keller Williams
    I am a patchwork quilt, reading books, and the product of living in fishing towns
    I am a simple plastic crate, I am a gunny sack, and I am lying at the bottom of a 231 year old cellar.

    I think I got a little odd there, though not as odd as I would have wished. :D
     
  3. fruit bat

    fruit bat All dumplings are real.

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    I am from a Dye-O-La Cabinet on top of a grammaphone, my father's tweed cap, and an old wooden footstool washed up on the beach.

    I am
    from an apple pie, a piece of garlic bread and a pot brownie.

    I am
    from Jesus Fucking Christ. I am Chantilly Lace, with a pretty face, a ponytail, hanging down, a wiggle when she walks, a wiggle when she talks, makes the world go round. There ain't nothin in the world like a big eyed girl, makes me act so funny, makes me spend my money. Makes me feel real loose, like a long neck goose. Oooh, Baby, that's a what I like!

    I am
    from my father,I am George Snow, and I am Marie Lorraine McCreary.

    I am
    from a bowl of hot soup in April, I am a stack of letters that shouldn't have been opened, I am a blank tape and a cheap guitar.

    I am
    from the crevice between my bed and a wall of midnight ramblings, I am a wicker basket from india, I am a drawer full of notebooks and I am lost inside my head.
     
  4. Orsino2

    Orsino2 Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    Better than mine. :D Ahah, thanks megpie. :)
     
  5. Major Peacenik

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    I am sink gunk; I am old guitars and pull-out couches
    I am a pledge drive on public television
    Look at what I've done--
    I am what I've become.

    Joe and Devin watch the window
    Looking into dark
    Fireworks on the horizon
    Shrubs and a girl who lays below

    Moths in the quiet
    A cardboard box at closet's back
    Unshed tears wait their turn


    Tried and failed to follow your formula... this just felt right :p

    btw... FRUIT BAT I LOVE YOUR SIG!!!!!!!
     
  6. fruit bat

    fruit bat All dumplings are real.

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    Ahaha. Your poem turned out better than mine. :D I love my sig too. :rolleyes:
     
  7. Edna

    Edna Member

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    I am made of whips, I am made of guitar strings, I am pencil shavings.
    I am of cornbread, hush puppies, and the gumbo.
    Hearing Je va au discos, mais je manque le Fais-Do-Do, je donnerais peu pres deux cent piastres, Pour une livre des ecrivisses.
    I am Elvis Presley, Jimmy Carter, and Aaron Neville.

    I am back to bayou teche, I am at the swim, I am climbing the weeping willows of my childhood.
    I am my own attic, the basement closet, floating in a perished antique shop.
     
  8. Laura-the-flowergirl

    Laura-the-flowergirl Long haired child

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    I am an old-fashioned, charming radio, a brown and worn-out sofa and my mother’s old blue raincoat.

    I am a cheese plate, a cherry pie and my grandmother’s hot tomato soup.

    “Don’t forget to hang your coat”, “Never step into a stranger’s car”, “Don’t talk that much in class”, that’s who I am.

    I am Sam, the best friend ever. I am Carl Barat and Pete Doherty, teaching me to be a libertine. I am Guy, full of respect.

    I am this one big blunder in love, I am Tori Amos playing ‘Silent all these years’, I am that lad on the London metro that I’ll never see again.

    I am at least twenty books, full of poems and full of secrets. I’m a song that describes my life. I am a memory, scared to fade.
     
  9. FreeBird1969

    FreeBird1969 Fleas on their paws.

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    Heeeeeyyyy, ya'll's poems came out mighty fine. :D

    I am from Feival Goes West tape, maggot-filled trashcans, and Earthworm Jim.

    I am from sweet potatoes and lobster tail.

    I am from brush your hair for ballet, put some shoes on, and Miss Priss.

    I am from Mr. Cronin, Mr. Tredemeyer, and my brother.

    I am from Lester Bangs readings and Mardi Gras parades.

    I am from my nose, Bosier City, and a tiki bar Down East.

    :) Ahhh, I loved that game.
     
  10. jojoeyes

    jojoeyes kinda high

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    i am from the computer, the pool and the weird mound of playdough that was always laying around.

    i am from my dads baked ziti, papa johns pizza and mcchickens

    i am from shutup and be nice to your brother

    i am from my father and my mother

    i am from forest gump and lying to my old man about fireworks

    i am from my heart and my paper
     
  11. White Scorpion

    White Scorpion 4umotographer

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    I am a sharp stone, a leftover bone.
    I am chewing on a mastodon steak, megatherium tail, washed down with fermented bile.
    I am oogalug and oogalag.
    I am the shaman, the hunter, the painter of caves.
    I am the fireball that fell from the sky, the shadow that hid the sun.
    I am the ground I will be buried in.
     
  12. jojoeyes

    jojoeyes kinda high

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    where u raised by a pack of witchist wolves, by any chance?
     
  13. White Scorpion

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    No. Just a bunch of nature's most poisonous 2-legged scorpions.:sunglasse
     
  14. Keramptha

    Keramptha Senior Member

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    I am from Stuffed lepoard, red plastic toy telephone and creaky high bunkbed.
    I am from raw boned fish, The body of jesus and cold potatoes.
    I am from, 'Hurry up!, come onn!' 'Ask me later' 'Well done, thats brilliant'
    I am from modern magician dressed in fubu jeans, Best friend of female muscles and true heart, Broken father not allowed to speak.
    I am from soaring firebird, held hand and alcohol coma.
    I am from cupboard corner, tears and laughter
     
  15. fruit bat

    fruit bat All dumplings are real.

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    AHHA holy hell. :D
     
  16. White Scorpion

    White Scorpion 4umotographer

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    I do hope that's not the lycanthropic relatives of my clan you're laughing at, fruit bat. It would be a 'howling' shame.:X
     
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